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Her Inner Shadow's avatar

This was such an unsettling read. I really loved the contrast between the childish rhythm and the darkness of what is actually happening.

Krislyn Lyon's avatar

Yay! Glad you liked it!

BluMinating's avatar

I love how the alliteration slips out naturally in my head, wonderful piece! ❤️

Krislyn Lyon's avatar

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!

AnthonyR's avatar

Love your vocab!

Informatic spoony🌀's avatar

Really loved this! I love how the chaos could make me imagine what was happening, thanks for sharing.

Krislyn Lyon's avatar

Yay! I'm glad you liked it!